GET A USEFUL FIRST RESULT

Name the reader and the next action.

Supply your rough draft, the audience, and the decision or response you need. Include a sample of your own writing if tone matters. Ask for one clear version and a short explanation of anything the edit removes or changes.

Watch for invented commitments, stronger claims, or a tone you would never use. Read the last sentence first: is the next step clear enough for the recipient to act on?